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The Truth About Me
Contributed by
WestCPunk
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Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 03:01:03 PM in AEST
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Shooting star
Traveling far
Humungous dreams
Vibrating screams
This world makes me sick
Passion for loud music
Depressing at times
But it was never said to be a crime
Some-what kind
Creative mind
Said to be talented
But definately not gifted
For I am punished
And cursed
Why this is so
I don't know
I'm lifes creation
I hold the weirdest imagination
Actions without a care
Red dyed hair
Day after day my heart dies
Damned with green eyes
Exhausted from all the abuse
Tired of being used
Thoughts of better days
I want so much to get away
Loves to laugh
Interests in witchcraft
I admit that I'm nosey
Just a little bit crazy
But not so bad
Or completely mad
But I can twist your words around
And make annoying sounds
I hold such a dark past
Hopefully it won't last
I'm fascinated by art
And I'm actually pretty smart
I'm very unique
But not weak
There are so many sides to me
That it's kinda creepy
But as you can see
I'm just me
And that's all I know how to be!
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WestCPunk
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2004-08-09 15:01:03]
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Re: The Truth About Me
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by arden on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 03:22:07 PM AEST
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well this explans alot shel lol :P
this was great. i liked it. nice rhyme
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Re: The Truth About Me
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by becca_bruce2000 on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 03:51:16 PM AEST
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| I really like this poem!! I wish I could write as good as you do, but hey maybe one day. |
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Re: The Truth About Me
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by brew on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 04:24:47 PM AEST
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| Differ write..........thought it was good tho! |
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Re: The Truth About Me
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 05:53:08 PM AEST
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Shelbi, the most important thing you can be is true to yourself. One day you will be free to search for your place in the world and cultivate what is important to you. Just keep putting one step in front of the other till that time arrives. It will be worth the wait.
Love,
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Re: The Truth About Me
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by Luka on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 06:11:52 PM AEST
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| Nice job, the poem had a nice rythem, and it was easy/fun to read i like how it changes to your different personalitys from happer to sadder to crazyer, reminds me of one of my favorite bands System Of A Down, nice job |
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Re: The Truth About Me
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by katyqueen35 on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 09:56:00 PM AEST
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That explain alot about you ..
very excellent write westcpunk...
Your very talented with your writing .don't ever stop.good job.
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Re: The Truth About Me
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by AspenGlow on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 06:06:00 AM AEST
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Unique is the gift.
Excellent write, thank you for sharing, and for the smile it gave me. |
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