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Suffering
Contributed by
Essentially9
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Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 02:56:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Suffering
Bringing the darkness
And closing off all the light
You're alone suff'ring
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2004-08-09 14:56:39] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Suffering
(User Rating: 1 ) by waos on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 03:56:50 PM AEST (User
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I don't usually read Haikus cause the ones I've read aren't very good, but I noticed your name on the thing, so I checked it out. I liked it. Good job. |
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Re: Suffering
(User Rating: 1 ) by savedbydeath on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 07:37:52 PM AEST (User
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i like this poem,it was short and sweet just how i like them,keep up the good work
from both of ur friends
savedbydeath&cheech |
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