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Anthem to the night.
Contributed by
backstreetdreamer
on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 02:22:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Looking up
in stunned surprise,
at star chased
opalescent skies,
starlight woven
with moonbeams,
a tunic knitted
by our dreams!
We caught our breath
at what we saw,
the tiniest glimpse
through an ebony door.
Into the magic
land of night,
with just a hint
of heavens light.
Morpheus came
his promise kept,
and in his arms
we soundly slept!
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backstreetdreamer
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2004-08-09 14:22:33]
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Re: Anthem to the night.
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by MoonlitMyst on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 03:14:14 PM AEST
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| I love poetry laced with metaphor. "A tunic knitted by our dreams," creates the perfect image of night, and as a night-lover, I can wholly appreciate this relation. Fantastically fascinating! |
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Re: Anthem to the night.
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by AdamChantell on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 07:55:35 PM AEST
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| you paint a perfect picture.. great write |
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