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Alone...
Contributed by
Seikjo
on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 01:37:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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All alone in my world of dreams.
Full blown color as i see the moon.
I see other worlds and other people.
Alone is my dream land with me--
and just me.
I fly around with angel wings.
I swim deep down to the depths of the ocean.
I can do anything in my dreams--
alone i walk this lonely road.
Not knowing where to go.
Alone in my dreaming light.
I sleep not knowing th world is passing by.
Dreaming about my dreams i can acompish.
Alone i walk down this road of dreams.
Not knowing the world is going away.
I walk alone on this road of color and life.
Alone i see the wonders of me.
Hand 'n' hand with me and my mind.
Alone i walk this path of golden medows.
Smiling that i finally found my world of pardise.
Alone i walk this road of pureity.
hand 'n' hand with me and my mind.
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Seikjo
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2004-08-09 13:37:10]
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Re: Alone...
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by KynaIsisPoetess on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 01:54:32 PM AEST
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| Wow...beautifully enchanting and stirring! what a unique perseptive of a comatose mind! i really like this! |
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Re: Alone...
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by Katie2008 on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 02:01:48 PM AEST
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I liked this poem. I won't say anything about someone I know that can relate to this, [As it might offend you for some unknown reason.] But I'll agree with the above comment, it was very well written.
Katie |
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Re: Alone...
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 03:05:22 PM AEST
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| beautiful and emotional write. excellent and well done. |
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