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emitions of a kiss
Contributed by
alyssakoren_03
on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 12:11:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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kiss me once make it last
kiss me twice don't hold back
kiss me again watch my world go past
touch me once, watch me shiver
touch me twice watch me quiver
touch me again watch me drown in your river
look into my eyes
tell me what you see
i'm waiting for your love to wash over me
hold me close feel my tears
whisper to me to get rid of my fears
touch me face, let me know
you're there for me
let it show
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2004-08-09 12:11:59]
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Re: emitions of a kiss
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by ChinaRivera on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 11:59:46 PM AEST
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i think it is a beautiful poem, and it flowed very nicely! Oh, and It rhymed! I just love it when they rhyme! I rhyme all the time! ha! ;-)
This poem was nice! No Need to ask for comments when you write this sweet girl! O K. This is a good work! Keep it up! May God bless you. Peace & Love. -China AkA Shorty J |
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Re: emitions of a kiss
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by secretwind on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 01:05:06 PM AEST
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NICE GOOD FLOW TOO.
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