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°°°Satan's Ten Comandments°°°
Contributed by
OreO
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Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 08:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Sitting in tears, satan came up to me
He sat down as he opened his jaw
I looked at him and said, go away, let me be
And he said you must follow my laws
¿?¿
He said, God will judge you for what you do
For Not being perfect as he wants
Obey my laws and i will not haunt you
And we can make real your suicide thoughts
¿?¿
l Thou shalt have no god, other than me
ll Thou shalt worship all things in an image
lll Take the name Lord and God in vain to me
lV Work on the Sabbath day, keep it evil, and damaged
¿?¿
V Flip your parents off and honour only me
Vl And kill every single holy righteous creature
Vll Commit that lustful adultry go taste it sweet
Vlll Steal everything you want, but leave the preacher
¿?¿
lX Thou shalt bear false witness against everyone
X And covet your neighbor's possesions desired
Now i've said my laws they cannot be undone
Upon your soul my suicide child
¿?¿
Blessed are those who are too tired, too busy
To hear their own children's cries
They are called my workers i make them dizzy
And create a whole world full of lies
¿?¿
Now here's the reason i wrote this poem
It's for all the people who feel like giving up
I'm not religious but hear these words
Don't do anything stupid and give up
¿?¿
There are people in this world who care for you
Don't break their hearts for your own need
When you listen to evil and sit with a broken heart
Satan will prey on you, and make you bleed
¿?¿
If you let evil take over your mind
And you let all the bad feelings boil
If you've got nothing around you but time
Make someone laugh, take away their turmoil
¿?¿
When you do good things to make others smile
It makes you feel good inside
It makes you strong, and gives you that mile
That you need to come out of denial
¿?¿
The world would be in trouble if we had these laws
So try and think of good things to do
Satan's commandments will never come to be
The strongest words in the world are "i love you"
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OreO
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2002-10-30 20:00:00]
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Re: °°°Satan's Ten Comandments°°°
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by Poetic_Angel on
Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 11:35:14 PM AEST
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| i liked this. it was really something to think about! good job! |
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Re: °°°Satan's Ten Comandments°°°
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 31st October 2002 @ 12:28:43 AM AEST
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Wow Oreo you did it again!
I realy liked this & great advice!
I also liked what you did with the typeing????
HOW DO YOU DO THAT???? Christina |
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Re: °°°Satan's Ten Comandments°°°
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by lil_angel on
Thursday, 31st October 2002 @ 12:47:18 AM AEST
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| this really made me think...thanks! it was a great poem. And so true also |
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Re: °°°Satan's Ten Comandments°°°
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by Blue on
Thursday, 31st October 2002 @ 01:07:37 AM AEST
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Thanks for the support of my poetry.
This was awesome...I enjoyed it.
I shall keep reading your writing, if you do the same for me!
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Re: °°°Satan's Ten Comandments°°°
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by Rakerman1999 on
Thursday, 31st October 2002 @ 04:30:45 AM AEST
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| Seem as though the world already follows his laws...but your last line tells the real way to change all that..Excellent write!! :o) Larry |
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Re: °°°Satan's Ten Comandments°°°
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by Emmie74 on
Thursday, 31st October 2002 @ 02:40:53 PM AEST
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Such a good poem.
I'll remember your words next time I'm feeling like giving up.
~Emmie74 |
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Re: °°°Satan's Ten Comandments°°°
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 2nd November 2002 @ 01:06:25 PM AEST
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Great write, OreO..
Jenni |
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Re: °°°Satan's Ten Comandments°°°
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by Baby_Blu-XTC on
Monday, 11th November 2002 @ 03:38:02 AM AEST
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| great job! |
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Re: °°°Satan's Ten Comandments°°°
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by Yellowrose on
Monday, 18th November 2002 @ 02:25:35 AM AEST
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| What a POWERFUL message in this poem. EXCELLENT advice. EXCEPTIONAL write. (((Hugs))) Yellowrose |
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Re: °°°Satan's Ten Comandments°°°
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by yellow_sundragon on
Thursday, 12th December 2002 @ 11:49:08 PM AEST
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WOWSA WOWSA WOWSA WOWSA WOWSA
That said. Let's move on to how much I love this poem.
I LOVE THIS POEM. There. As a person who almost committed suiside..... I feel extremely stupid for doing that. But I must contact my laywer, I never got a meeting with Satan...
Not that I'd want one. But it sounded cool.
Back to the poem. Beautifully stunning. And I love it. Can I print it? It can be my motto.
YS |
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