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Don't
Contributed by
pixie
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Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 09:47:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Don’t tell me last night you cried,
Because I know that it is a lie,
Lies fall out of your mouth like a waterfall,
I know your tricks I know them all.
Don’t tell me that you love me,
That by my side is where you want to be,
I know your words don’t quite ring true,
I know it’s a lie, because I know you.
Don’t turn on the fake waterworks,
Claiming that you’re really hurt,
Crocodile & tears spring to mind,
You liars are all of the same kind.
Don’t tell me you are truly sorry,
For causing pain & all the worry,
Your words are not to be trusted,
I think you’re well & truly busted.
Don’t come to me when you need help,
You fully deserve all of your pained yelps,
I have become wise to your games,
I know who is really to blame.
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pixie
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Re: Don't
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by liquidsunshine on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 09:56:38 AM AEST
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Harsh... hoping this stemmed from nowhere and not from somewhere inside... ~*there I go with that hope again*~
I really like the tone in this poem. It creates exactly what the feeling is all about. It really does.
Lots of love and peace be with you,
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Re: Don't
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by TheBlackVoid on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 10:31:20 AM AEST
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Good write tho i dont fully get ur anger.. but i dont get much of anything..s o dont take it personal..lol.. good write i loved it
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Re: Don't
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 02:04:14 PM AEST
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Great write pixie!!
Keep em coming! |
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Re: Don't
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 03:20:27 PM AEST
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| brilliant write with much emotion behind it. |
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Re: Don't
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by becca_bruce2000 on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 04:17:25 PM AEST
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| this is a wonderful Poem!! That is all I can say after reading it, I feel your pain!! |
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Re: Don't
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 12:52:40 AM AEST
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Pixie, one of the reasons you will always know who you are, and where you are headed is because you are so honest with others, and that means especially you!
Stay that way always Pixie......never fake it with them or you.
I really enjoyed this poem.......you've got someone pegged real well.........and I'd say that is really swell! Stay honest above all else!
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