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A Few Fleeting Moments and Instantaneous
Contributed by
liquidsunshine
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Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 09:41:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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A Few Fleeting Moments:
At first it was a chilling-- a settling of fright
In a snap it was a head shake-- a need for chance of "It's alright"
And suddenly it's hollow-- with skeleton's sunken eyes
Then it's shattered-- overtaking, falling up into the skies
All the while it's frantic failure-- grasping, clawing at the sea
Only hoping--praying, needing for this terror not to be
Instantaneous:
In an instant I sense your melancholy tone
In an instant I hear that you're vexed about it all
In an instant I find that you think you have missed out
In an instant I seem to be slipping inside
In an instant I can't quiet the beating of my heart
In an instant I feel like I'm choking on air
In an instant I can't grip anything anymore
In an instant I'm falling apart as I sit
In an instant I rock in that childish pose
In an instant I have vommitted and can't feel my mouth
In an instant I cry in every sense of the word
...All in the instant I think about losing you
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liquidsunshine
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2004-08-09 09:41:50]
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Re: A Few Fleeting Moments and Instantaneous
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by Stitch on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 10:30:23 AM AEST
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Goodness, this is powerful! You have taken me there into the fear and panic with you. Incredible write.
Praying that you're ok.
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Re: A Few Fleeting Moments and Instantaneous
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by CrimsonTears on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 01:28:39 PM AEST
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Great write....excellent job
Lots of Love
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Re: A Few Fleeting Moments and Instantaneous
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by theMoth on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 07:37:57 PM AEST
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| A really deep outpoor, nice write.--Mothy |
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