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Unspoken words
Contributed by
zenmind
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Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 02:07:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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The moon rises as the sun sets on the ocean,
bringing qualities of reflective imaginative mind gaps,
and with that, a spark of insight.
I've only been told this once,
when I was a child, sleeping,
an angel held my hand as we floated through time,
and saw the beginning.
It's hard to describe eternity,
but I saw it motionless.
Beauty is always wrapped in an unmoving moment,
seemingly ordinary,
but it speaks through reminders.
I have been riding the wave of acknowledgement
and now feel, that I will never stop,
and this wave will carry me to the next ocean.
All oceans connect,
and all things connect to the ocean,
breathing life-forms of intelligence, grace, and fear.
I'm beginning to remember again,
the life of unknown origins,
the life of deep sea oceans,
or desert caves,
and outer space,
that only fills inner space once you realize it's inside, not outside,
yet both.
A paradox emurges the more you rationalize,
and so it would be best to stop thinking so much,
and experience life directly.
Too much has been said,
and the moon will rise soon enough,
speaking all eternal truths.
Don't speak, it is already speaking.
Copyright ©
zenmind
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2004-08-09 02:07:54]
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Re: Unspoken words
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by emystar on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 03:07:55 AM AEST
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Mezmerising, very thought provoking.
huggs, luv,
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Re: Unspoken words
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 03:25:08 PM AEST
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| i agree with emy. amazing write. |
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Re: Unspoken words
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by TheRaven on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 01:20:25 AM AEST
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i agree, very thought provoking. challenges my mind, had to read it through a couple times. each time it got better, as with all your work. great job you have an awesome talent. keep it up i look forward to more...
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Re: Unspoken words
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by FleurdeSang on
Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 10:15:15 AM AEST
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I am speechless... And yet there are many things on my mind that I want to say, but the words cannot form... So here goes... You have left me breathless, and feeling drained... Beautiful, surreal, perfect... You, my friend, have captured these essences eloquently. Eternity cannot be fully described, you must see it for yourself... But from what I just read, you have experienced this. Dazzling flow, awesome words... Exhilirating ride! Many thanks again, for sharing this... You are truly talented. Pen on, my friend!
All my love and respects!!
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Re: Unspoken words
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 01:18:48 PM AEST
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truely beautiful:) hugs n' love nessa
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