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Cant stand it
Contributed by
SkippysAM0r0n123
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Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 01:50:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Trying so hard to fight the urge,
Memorie's seem to come,
My mind gose blind,
I cant stand the way you make me feel,
I cant stand it,
I guess all wounds dont heal,
I cant help the way i see,
I cant help the way i wanna be
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2004-08-09 01:50:36]
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Re: Cant stand it
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by Katie2008 on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 10:56:04 AM AEST
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I like this poem a lot, you said exactly what you needed to say and it was short and right to the point. Great job.
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Re: Cant stand it
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by TheBlackVoid on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 11:14:35 AM AEST
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Well writtin in such a short poem and well explained.
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Re: Cant stand it
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 03:26:53 PM AEST
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| excellent write in so few words. |
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