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A sweetness such as summer
Contributed by
Tanmaya
on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 01:28:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
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A sweetness such as summer’s breath
a softness like an early dawn dream…
your smile lingers long after you leave
and fills the silence with whispers of magic.
I have sometimes reached out to a lonely star
dreaming in the arms of a pristine night…
and sang it a million sonnets about love
and somehow you were a part of each.
There are stories that are yet to happen,
that belong to us, that weave us into each other.
There is a music no one has played before…
that waits over the edge of a song never sung.
I had walked once long back, not knowing,
into a place in your heart that you had forgotten.
I had held your silent words in my hands, seen them smile
back softly, and I had carried some away with me.
Now they remain here deep in my soul…
now they tell me all your sweetest dreams.
They speak a strange and beautiful language that
I’ve never heard before…and yet I understand it.
If I never had another moment with you
I would still have you, I would still be yours.
All the wonder, all the wisdom, all the magic there is...
can never explain this simple mystery…called love.
Copyright ©
Tanmaya
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2004-08-09 01:28:14]
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Re: A sweetness such as summer
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by emystar on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 01:37:54 AM AEST
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A heavenly beautifull testiment to total luv for another.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy
I'm always happy to see the beautiy right here on planet Earth as it's rare. |
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Re: A sweetness such as summer
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by TheSchroedmeister on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 01:39:57 AM AEST
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Before I say anything, I should say that I hate love poems
But this one I absolutely adored
It has been a long time sense I have read a love poem that deserves the name, and for that I am grateful
Thank you very much for this poem, I truly enjoyed its every fluid and heart-felt word
Look forward to more |
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Re: A sweetness such as summer
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by venkat on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 01:49:13 AM AEST
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such is the magic of love..
this poem is absolutely beautiful. venkat |
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Re: A sweetness such as summer
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by Fionndruinne on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 03:14:39 AM AEST
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Vanya ná!
This is lovely. I cannot single out any lines I especially liked, because they all wove together too well. All I can say is, this is a perfect poem to read as I turn in for the night. Many thanks.
Andrew |
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Re: A sweetness such as summer
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by becca_bruce2000 on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 03:54:29 AM AEST
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| That is really a wonderful poem!! It should be in a book if it is not in one!! the best I have read by far!! |
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Re: A sweetness such as summer
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 02:41:46 AM AEST
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Lilting and . . . lovely. 'Lovely' is probably overused as a descriptor nowadays, but at this time in the morning, its the only suitable emotive descriptor I can conjur.
Such floaty and . . . intriguing a take on this mystery as you call it.
Keep writing. |
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Re: A sweetness such as summer
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 04:34:48 PM AEST
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A timeless piece with understated grace and really beautifully written.
Ahhhh love......
Makes for great poetry..
Kie |
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Re: A sweetness such as summer
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by WinterFawn on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 05:21:22 AM AEST
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I love the soft, dreamy feel of this poem. Very, very beautifully written.
WinterFawn |
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Re: A sweetness such as summer
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by Silent-No-More on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 12:11:11 AM AEST
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This is so nicely put together.... as if it just poured out of you. It is though too good in word choice and flow to believe it just fell onto the page - yet somehow, it doesn't seem overly 'worked'.
Very nicely done! I enjoyed this.
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Re: A sweetness such as summer
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by Wachumiri on
Saturday, 18th September 2004 @ 04:18:18 PM AEST
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The mystery called love... you've captured it in writing that we all might see. For taht I thank you.
Beauty and grace, the whole way through.
Take care.
David |
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Re: A sweetness such as summer
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by marshmalloska on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 09:19:27 AM AEST
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| that was lovely, i think love is less of a mystery for that effort, i think i understand more what it is meant to be thatn ever before |
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