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A Sad End
Contributed by
huey
on
Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 07:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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The time has come to make amends,
For lives of misery to finally end
These words of death I now do send
Eternally to my dear friends,
Death is knocking on my door
To end a life forevermore
To rest a soul so tired and sore
With a shadow-infected eerie core
Darkness flows withing these veins
Where morbid thought successfully reign
And hope of futures slowly wane
For thought of happiness go insane
The links of this brain are rusting and breaking
The foundations are going and shaking
Eternally unstable, a Hell it's making
To end that, this life Death is taking
A future, these hands are no longer seeking
The essence of life, this body is slowly leaking
On the edge of a grave, these feets are riskily creaking
Insanity, it's effectiveness is now just peaking...
Death is knocking on my door...
Copyright ©
huey
... [
2002-10-30 19:00:00]
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Re: A Sad End
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by OreO on
Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 10:20:28 PM AEST
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I'm glad you added that
your NOT mentally instable
i think alot of your friends
would be worrying about you
right about now
Great write, Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: A Sad End
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 31st October 2002 @ 12:05:53 AM AEST
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| I really enjoyed this one a lot & welcome back!! Christina |
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Re: A Sad End
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 2nd November 2002 @ 01:01:07 PM AEST
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Good write...full of emotions...glad to see you here again..
Jenni |
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Re: A Sad End
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by Baby_Blu-XTC on
Wednesday, 13th November 2002 @ 11:43:15 AM AEST
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| 1 of da best poems I eva read.Amazin job. |
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Re: A Sad End
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by Shabby on
Monday, 19th May 2003 @ 05:42:25 AM AEST
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| i could relate very well....nice writing...very vivid |
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