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Habit You Can't Break
Contributed by
theraven
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Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 12:50:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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Walls painted green to help lift
Moods. With no sunlight all I see
Is the glistening razor; a syringe would be more
Fitting. Wind rustles the dead leaves around
The asphalt, a dark cloud lays forbidding overhead.
My vice I still dream of while
My mother can only scream and yell;
Instead of the green walls to help me,
I rely on the needle to lift me.
The Raven
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2004-08-09 00:50:58]
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Re: Habit You Can't Break
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by inoc on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 03:15:02 AM AEST
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this poem made me sad
written cleverly tho
but hope life gets better
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Re: Habit You Can't Break
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 03:33:42 PM AEST
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| great write. |
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Re: Habit You Can't Break
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by dartsofplsre87 on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 03:58:05 AM AEST
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| Great poem. |
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Re: Habit You Can't Break
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 08:16:53 AM AEST
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| touching |
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Re: Habit You Can't Break
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by Silent_Storm on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 08:45:04 PM AEST
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| great poem, I liked the format it was written in. |
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