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Lesson Learned
Contributed by
suzy
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Wednesday, 17th July 2002 @ 06:55:40 AM in AEST
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Tears cascading down the cheek
Words not coming when you try to speak
When did life begin to get so bleak?
Now its solace that I seek.
Each day is harder to live
So much of me to give
My heart bleeding like a sieve
Pain controlling me makes me inoperative
Not knowing where to turn
How my eyes do burn
My stomach begins to churn
Just another hard lesson I’ve had to learn.
Copyright ©
suzy
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2002-07-17 06:55:40]
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Re: Lesson Learned
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by humphdj on
Wednesday, 17th July 2002 @ 11:25:30 PM AEST
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This was good..........sad and unsettling
Good write
Rgds
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Re: Lesson Learned
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by Chrissie on
Thursday, 18th July 2002 @ 05:16:04 PM AEST
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This is a very heartfelt piece Suzy and touched me...well done
Chrissie x |
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Re: Lesson Learned
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by chatabox on
Saturday, 20th July 2002 @ 06:18:10 AM AEST
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oh Suzy, you seem in turmoil. My heart goes out to you. I hope all will be better soon.
wonderful write. |
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Re: Lesson Learned
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by Patricia_Petro on
Monday, 5th August 2002 @ 10:48:54 AM AEST
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Beautiful poem, Suzy. Ittouched a cord in my heart. I don't think a day's gone by I haven't cried from a very hard lesson learned four months ago. Hang in there. I am.
~Patricia xx |
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