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Role Model
Contributed by
Twitch06
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Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 08:18:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Everything becoming black and cold
Wondering what's going to happen next.
Falling down, watching everything go by,
Thinking about things and seeing how they make out.
All I thought about was her.
Her beautiful smile,
Her long blonde hair,
And her outrageous mind.
Seeing nothing but black, and being cold
Made me worry what was going to happen to me
I didn't want to lose her.
She made my day every time she hugged me.
And just sitting in that chair, brought me back again.
To be with her, to be there when she needed me.
Being someone to look up too is hard.
Making choices can change every piece of the puzzle that she puts together.
But it'll be my fault if she gets hurt,
Cause I wasn't there for her.
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Twitch06
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2004-08-08 20:18:41]
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Re: Role Model
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by brew on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 08:23:00 PM AEST
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| Deep write, but cant blame yourself for all.things happen and we are there, just not how we always want to be. |
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Re: Role Model
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by tlhInganHom on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 08:31:47 PM AEST
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| Watching childhood is so beautiful and so painful at the same time. With all the "youngins" in my life, it's hard not to relate to this. Good write. |
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Re: Role Model
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by TheBlackVoid on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 01:24:04 AM AEST
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This poem sorta relates to me.. my two older sisters are both pregnant..so many times i wanted to run away or attempt suicide again..but i couldnt..because i want to be a role model for them..and i have a lot of people i care about and vice-versa. but newayz good write
Alucia, |
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