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lost to oblivion
Contributed by
InnerBeautyQueen
on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 07:39:23 PM in AEST
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i can feel the familiar creeping
unyeiding fear surpressing the truth
the disease is coming back
only no one knows
and i can't tell them
thoughts keep haunting my head
maybe i'm faking it
maybe this is just a dream
maybe someone just wants to scare me
because maybe this is all a joke
but maybes fade from my mind
when pain wakes me in the night
because i know it's real
and nothing will get better
not in the long run
i seem to be pulling away from the color
dragging myself to a black a white world
the walls are fading into each other
i can't feel myself
lost to oblivion
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2004-08-08 19:39:23]
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Re: lost to oblivion
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by Katie2008 on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 07:48:12 PM AEST
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I feel that way too. I hope you feel better soon. Continue to keep writing, I think it really helps. Find something that you feel let's you express yourself [in a healthy way.] and stick with it. Good luck and great write.
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Re: lost to oblivion
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by Nazmythian on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 07:52:01 PM AEST
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This poem resonates with profound sorry and draws my heart out to you. Wonderfully written. Keep your pen name in mind and use your inner colors to paint your world.
Naz ~ |
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Re: lost to oblivion
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by Nazmythian on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 07:56:49 PM AEST
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My appologies ... I meant to say profound sorrow ... I need to fire my proof reader
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Re: lost to oblivion
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by InnerBeautyQueen on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 07:59:33 PM AEST
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lol.. that's quite alright...
i got the jist
thank you for the comment
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Re: lost to oblivion
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 09:58:03 AM AEST
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A feeling I can relate too.
I hope you are feeling better soon, andare able to find someone to talk to, or someone to pick your feelings up, someone to bring back your smile, so you know longer feel blue. |
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