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MOTHER
Contributed by
Alina
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Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 06:22:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Imagine there's no Heaven
Imagine we have no soul
Imagine of my broken heart
Tell me mother, How can you make it whole?
Imagine there's no tears
Then we would have never cried
Imagine if there was no life
Then there would be no suicide
Imagine if there was no abuse
Then we wouldn't fight
Imagine if there was trust and not misuse
Tell me mother, Would you then tuck me in at night?
Imagine if you loved me
And I loved you in return
But you don't love me
And I don't love you
So our hate can forever burn !!
Copyright ©
Alina
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2004-08-08 18:22:27]
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Re: MOTHER
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by darkplaidbabe on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 06:26:28 PM AEST
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wow. you took the words right out of my mouth. awesome write!
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Re: MOTHER
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by tlhInganHom on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 06:35:49 PM AEST
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| I really like the repeating "Imagine" line, and the work in general. It's catchy :-) I must be honest, though; I don't understand the last line... But that could be just me being dense~ |
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Re: MOTHER
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by brew on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 08:21:18 PM AEST
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| Hmm.sounds as if you are mad at mom.....reasons behind I suppose.but you know that is the MOST important one you could ever have,,,,,,no matter the circumstance....They live for what they think is good, we dont.but you will. Good write tho, with alot of feelings.......Sorry tho! |
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Re: MOTHER
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by TheBlackVoid on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 01:43:23 AM AEST
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I was in CPS for 2 1/2 yrs and i did blame my family.. i was mad at them..i wanted to hate them but i couldnt because i needed them.. in the end i realized it was all for my own good..and some of it was my own fault. i am home now and i still struggle feeling like everything has to be in routine. but it dont..its ur life now. and dont hate ur mom..because u never know what u have till its gone as i'm always told..and then its too late. good write tho :) well expressed
Alucia, |
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