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serial killer
Contributed by
Jaylynne
on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 05:16:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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he lurks in the darkness,
desperate with an inhuman hunger,
his mouth dry with the unquenchable thirst,
the need all consuming,
entangling him in its wicked embrace,
he feels the rage,
surging through his viens,
he smiles to himself,
NOW IS THE TIME TO PREY,
upon the unsuspecting filth,
such dirty creatures,
with hollow souls,
shouting lies and obsenities,
yes,
now is the time to prey
he captures the tourtured,
ignoring her pleas,
with the blade of salvation,
he spills her blood and
takes all sin away,
she is pure now,
he gently kisses her cheek,
and steps away,
out into the light,
people buzz by him on the dimly lit street,
but they don't see the monster,
they simply smile and wave hello,
you see for he isn't a hideous beast,
he is just like you and me,
a magnificently beautiful creature,
intellegent and charming,
he smiles to himself,
watching the them scury about,
ignorant to his purpose,
he laughs quitely,
for soon it will be time to prey,
for he is god and he will take all sin away
Copyright ©
Jaylynne
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2004-08-08 17:16:31]
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Re: serial killer
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 05:28:10 PM AEST
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Wow! Really intriguing poem.
I like it but I am not sure why......
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Re: serial killer
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by SuperAsh16 on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 08:34:32 PM AEST
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| i like it because ins very thought provoking. then again, i dont get it. but i dont get many things so dont feel bad. good job though. great write. |
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Re: serial killer
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by TheBlackVoid on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 02:17:53 AM AEST
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I second the last comment.. i dont get it..but usually dont get much..lol..but great write. kinda sad tho
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Re: serial killer
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by Hakiokusaken on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 09:30:43 AM AEST
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I think the poem was very nicely written. I liked it and I understood it so keep it up. NICE WRITE...
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