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Dead
Contributed by
Lovely_4_Steve
on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 03:59:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I'm dead just like you
you never knew all the joy I had with you
pushing away wanting to go
wishing to leave
learning the truth
feeling useless
feeling pain
as the razorblade slides down with ease
all emotions gone
nothing new wanting to go
leaving this hell hole never to return
never to see you again.
I'm dead just like you
Copyright ©
Lovely_4_Steve
... [
2004-08-08 15:59:49]
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Re: Dead
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 05:02:31 PM AEST
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This is amazing. So short but truly full of emotion.
A truly great poem
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Re: Dead
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by Jaylynne on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 06:19:46 PM AEST
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this is a realy great poem it is so real and full of emotion keep up the good work,
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Re: Dead
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by darkplaidbabe on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 07:26:12 PM AEST
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damn....i mean wow this is....just..wow. pure emotion. awesome write!
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Re: Dead
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by TheBlackVoid on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 02:29:43 AM AEST
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Very sad and emotion filled. great write and all so true
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