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Call My Name
Contributed by
mdmorash
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Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 12:01:44 PM in AEST
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Call My Name
So call my name in times of grief.
No, do not wait till all is lost,
Lost there beneath the winters frost.
For in the night there comes a thief,
To reap your soul just like a sheaf;
Your protests then they will exhaust,
So call my name.
For I will keep your waiting brief;
While catching what from you’s been tossed,
Upon the ground to pay the cost;
I vow to you this true relief,
So call my name.
© 2004
Michael David Morash
All rights reserved
Copyright ©
mdmorash
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2004-08-08 12:01:44]
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Re: Call My Name
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by tlhInganHom on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 01:19:00 PM AEST
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| I like the poem, though the rhyme scheme is sort of confusing. |
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Re: Call My Name
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by kidpoet_213 on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 02:30:55 PM AEST
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I like the poem... short and sweet... keep writing...
~Donna~
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Re: Call My Name
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by Tanmaya on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 03:50:40 AM AEST
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I liked the first lines-
'So call my name in times of grief.
No, do not wait till all is lost,
Lost there beneath the winters frost.'
A good write.
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