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I'm dirty and filthy right down to the bone
Contributed by
corrupted_minds
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Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 04:30:15 AM in AEST
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Young girl, don’t cry for me,
I’ve been all that I could be,
Been up this road and down the street,
Fell from the sky, landed on my feet,
Been hunted down, abused and alone,
And on my body it is shown,
Tainted, scarred and unperfected,
Lived this life undetected,
To the silhouette I call my home,
I’m dirty and filthy right down to the bone,
It’s made me cold, lonely and sour,
So hand me the soap and run me the shower,
I’ll wash away my bitter precision,
Set my life in the right direction,
Pick myself right off the ground,
I’d been lost but now I’m found,
Been locked in jail, but now set free,
To be the person I have to be,
I’m not alone my friends have come,
To heal the wombs that have been done,
Together we are one at soul,
They’d not stop me when I fall,
They leaped of with me without a clue,
And together in the sky we flew,
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Re: I'm dirty and filthy right down to the bone
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by Dizza_13 on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 04:42:16 AM AEST
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BRAVO BRAVO! this is really good. Althogh i dont
think i can relate 2 it, i liked it lots.
Dizza
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Re: I'm dirty and filthy right down to the bone
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by Nursey275 on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 04:59:04 AM AEST
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| Absolutely fantastic. I think when you read this it hits a chord inside. Very emotional and all i can say is well done i loved it. |
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Re: I'm dirty and filthy right down to the bone
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by cj_ranson on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 06:14:03 AM AEST
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that was reel good, deserves all the praise it can get
Cj
xoxox |
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Re: I'm dirty and filthy right down to the bone
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by joydeep_nath on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 06:26:19 AM AEST
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hi...nice poem..i like the style n openness of yr poem..good..i just wish they had allowed more
sexually explicit poems in hrere... |
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Re: I'm dirty and filthy right down to the bone
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by gery_giggles on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 07:21:31 AM AEST
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at first it seemed to be like you have given up but then suddenly the poem turns to hope and acceptance...great write.
luv always |
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Re: I'm dirty and filthy right down to the bone
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by thumper on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 09:44:39 AM AEST
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Good poem. The ups and downs of life (at least that's how I interpreted it) and the abuses we all endure and sometimes put upon ourselves. We all have our own stories and this is yours. ;o)
Thumps ; 0) |
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