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Resurection (Mynstral Lives )
Contributed by
Nazmythian
on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 02:57:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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The power of love, and the strength of The Magic
Events of my world, wreaking sorrow and havoc
Inside my soul as I fight to control
The tempting urge to put words to page
The fire still burns, though the flames have been smothered
An ember flares up, and encourages others
I find as I sit, determined to quit
From the ashes arises The Sage
I promised myself, I could ignore what's inside
Time has determined, that it won't be denied
Music lives on with the beat of each song
Demanding the words to voice its rage
I now continue, I will practice this, my art
Writing down those words, that are heard within my heart
Magic and chance are relived with each dance
And move on with each coming of age
With my pen in hand, I'll recount all the stories
The days of our lives, of our sorrows and glories
For I can't deny, who I am inside
And it will not let me keep it caged !!
Mynstral Lives
Copyright ©
Nazmythian
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Re: Resurection (Mynstral Lives )
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by tlhInganHom on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 03:00:17 AM AEST
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Weeeeeeee! I have respect for anyone who can write a rhyming poem well -- rythem considered. It almost seems a lost art...
Anyway, This is beautifully done and cute to boot! Nice work :) |
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Re: Resurection (Mynstral Lives )
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by shelby on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 03:10:58 AM AEST
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wow! dont know what else to say incredible bravo!
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Re: Resurection (Mynstral Lives )
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by emystar on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 03:32:44 AM AEST
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A masterpeice of beauty.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Resurection (Mynstral Lives )
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by venkat on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 04:29:39 AM AEST
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Excellent ..this has become your best poem..
venkat |
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Re: Resurection (Mynstral Lives )
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by Nursey275 on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 06:08:14 AM AEST
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hi
Thought this poem was really good. Enjoyed it a lot. Well done. :0) |
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Re: Resurection (Mynstral Lives )
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by Nursey275 on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 06:08:19 AM AEST
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hi
Thought this poem was really good. Enjoyed it a lot. Well done. :0) |
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Re: Resurection (Mynstral Lives )
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by Nursey275 on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 06:08:29 AM AEST
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hi
Thought this poem was really good. Enjoyed it a lot. Well done. :0) |
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Re: Resurection (Mynstral Lives )
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by Nursey275 on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 06:08:39 AM AEST
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hi
Thought this poem was really good. Enjoyed it a lot. Well done. :0) |
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Re: Resurection (Mynstral Lives )
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by CrimsonTears on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 01:35:47 PM AEST
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wow fantastic, i loved it...great job
Lots of Love
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Re: Resurection (Mynstral Lives )
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by Silent-No-More on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 12:59:03 AM AEST
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Five months for you.... five years, or thereabouts, for me. Both.... too long. A mere moment is too long - when it's there waiting, pushing... wanting to spill out. It can't be denied. Not really. Whether you do something with it or not - it's still there. And the longer it goes that you don't yield to it - the louder it gets until it's crashing up against the inside of you... finally, at some point, bursting out. Just as.... it so clearly did here.
I absolutely love this piece. It is, of course, well written - but it is also, so much more than the words on the page. It's simply enormous.
Rejoicing in the fact that you failed in your attempt to let it go,
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Re: Resurection (Mynstral Lives )
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by FleurdeSang on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 04:16:55 PM AEST
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SUPERB!! The talented mynstral lives on!
For I can't deny, who I am inside
And it will not let me keep it caged !!
LOVE that part! You bleed your emotions out on paper, and you do it so well... Please... Never cease enchanting us, your eternal devoted audience! Incredible piece, as always!! PERFECT! Always a pleasure reading your fabulous masterpieces! How beautiful, these words, your mind... Thank you for sharing! Much love and hugs! Forever,
Votre fleur de amour
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