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Darkened Daydreams
Contributed by
RavenShadows
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Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 01:11:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The gates of hell are opening
Can you taste the blood
All of the hated
The bad and the good
The darkness is falling
Falling all around
The daylight is fading
Then comes a deafening sound
Its the sound of the angels
That are dying in the dark
Trying to save your soul
To save that last hopeful spark
You close your eyes
You've learned to dispise
Hate all your fellow man
You once dreamt of love and laughter
Now you dream only when you can
You dream in the daylight
Stay awake in the night
Hollowed empty darkened soul
Death holds you so very tight
Open your eyes no light around
The stars have all fallen
And all you have now are darkened daydreams
In the afternoons calling
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RavenShadows
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2004-08-08 01:11:52]
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Re: Darkened Daydreams
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 01:15:29 AM AEST
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| amazing write. =] |
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Re: Darkened Daydreams
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by The_Angel_Of_Darkness on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 01:18:37 AM AEST
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| Awesome write I love it, and thanks for your comments on my poems. |
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Re: Darkened Daydreams
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by Avarice_Riot on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 02:03:02 AM AEST
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| Wow. This has to be the best poem I've read in a while. I LOVED the dark atmosphere, and the choice of words were really excellent and effective. Overall, an amazing piece of work. Well done. |
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Re: Darkened Daydreams
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by shelby on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 02:47:24 AM AEST
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must be the night for dark and spooky this gave me chills a great dark write
michelle |
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Re: Darkened Daydreams
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by thumper on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 09:06:15 AM AEST
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Strong and dark imagery. I really liked this write.
Thumps ; 0) |
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Re: Darkened Daydreams
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by tonya_turner on
Saturday, 2nd April 2011 @ 11:53:02 AM AEST
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Wow, I love the way you went with this one. Its cool.
Tonya Turner |
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