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Lookin' Back
Contributed by
Pogo
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Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 12:49:52 AM in AEST
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removed due to content, please see rules.
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Pogo
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Re: Lookin' Back
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by RavenShadows on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 12:58:46 AM AEST
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| Wow, omg, this is great. I love its intesity and anger with the sad undertone. It is really awesome! |
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Re: Lookin' Back
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by tlhInganHom on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 12:59:38 AM AEST
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Angry, angsty, and, well, troubled as it is, this is the first thing I've read of your's and really liked. Brutal honesty, babe.
As I was reading it, I could hear a melody behind it, which is the meat that makes up any good lyrics. Did you say/sing it aloud as you wrote it? You should try doing that with your other work as well; It'll probably help its rythem.
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