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Three, Five, Seven, Eight
Contributed by
MomentInTime
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Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 10:33:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Three, five, seven, eight
floating bubbles in the air;
some up, some down, some all around,
some breaking in my hair.
Up down, up down
I try to catch them all;
though some just run away from me
and splatt against the wall.
Puff blow, puff blow
to make them go so high;
till one bubble had the nerve
of splatting in my eye.
I cried and cried and cried some more,
but the bubble would not leave,
and that’s the end of bubble-blow
‘cos now I’m really peeved.
G.B.A 1988
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MomentInTime
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Re: Three, Five, Seven, Eight
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by thumper on
Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 11:27:57 PM AEST
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This is cute. Makes you wonder what kids REALLY think. Nice one to read to little ones. Good rhythm and interesting point of view.
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Re: Three, Five, Seven, Eight
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by emystar on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 12:33:52 AM AEST
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I agree very cute. Quit a while ago when I was a little girl I was very when no more tears shampoo put on the market.
Great job and very creative.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Three, Five, Seven, Eight
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by venkat on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 04:37:41 AM AEST
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| Good.. venkat |
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Re: Three, Five, Seven, Eight
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by Silent-No-More on
Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 01:56:18 PM AEST
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Jordan --- My seven year old daughter is here at my side... She wanted to hear some poetry and in our search for something appropriate for her... we stumbled across this. She liked it very much (as did I) and giggled in just the right places (as did I).
Thanks for the fun!
SNM |
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Re: Three, Five, Seven, Eight
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by lovesucks on
Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 11:30:18 PM AEST
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| nothing to say but absolutely, beautifully written kids are so great. I loved this |
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