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Restless

Contributed by cheech on Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 10:25:18 PM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff



I'm so young
it'll never be done
it'll always be fun
2 of us will always make 1

this is the time in my life
I could commit a crime
I feel so energetic to climb
a mountain with your love

if you left,than why
on earth do you think I'm your fan
I blame you for everything bad
that ever happened in my life

I used to be so restless
but now i'm just helpless
I feel so helpless it's shameless

I use to be so restless
but now i'm just helpless
I feel so helpless it's shameless

sometimes I feel so old cuz
it's so cold,I feel crazy cuz
I'm sitten here so lazy like

it's what you brought that
made my thoughts so confusing
now i'm using his love to show
myself that i've got to get up and glow!!!!

I use to be so restless
but now I'm just helpless
I feel so helpless it's shameless




Copyright © cheech ... [ 2004-08-07 22:25:18]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Restless (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 01:13:10 AM AEST
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for one thing how dare you blame someone else for your problems and mistakes. you did not have to get engaged to that person; it would have been your choice. youre blaming this on your scapegoat because you cant deal with it. so you are without a father and someone that treats you right? well get over it, people have worse problems than that. did you ever get a look at the world or are you focused too much on one issue in your life? i hope you get what you deserve. karma is always unbiased in that aspect.


Re: Restless (User Rating: 1 )
by somber on Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 02:57:14 AM AEST
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I feel a lot of pain right now And Your coment To this young lady Is agrivating me even More,

How dare you be so callas and thoughtless over som 1 elses feelings,

Next time if you dont have anything constructive to say keep ya fool Mouth shut b4 you ruin some 1''s Life.





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