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A Few Extra Days Of Life

Contributed by TwEeK on Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 09:35:27 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

im a good person
cant help but become
to love something
in wich i cannot have

if that be a butterfly
so carefree
floating in the breeze
wishing for its happy lifestyle

or secretly wishing
for the hottie next door
to feel the same
and acctually know im alive

oh
the wonders
i conjure
and create in my mind

how will i go on
with my wishing
my hopeing
and unfulfilled dreams

that is
to not have any
not one
no little crush

no secret dream to be free
none
just to be empty
and hollow

but how can someone live that way
you may ask
no one ca live that way
they'd die

and die i will
not on the out side
but on the inside
yes

this will be who i need to become
if not
the pain of it all will kill me
its confusing i know

ill have to die to live
sounds strange dosent it
dose it even sound possible
maybe

just look at the kids on the fringe
see them
they dont have no life left
except maybe the will to live

if any
they are the ones
who shut off all emotion
so they can be strong

to the hurt they forever recive
shur
they may not last long
and break down to suicide

but at least its and extra month or week of life

Copyright © TwEeK ... [ 2004-08-07 21:35:27]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: A Few Extra Days Of Life (User Rating: 1 )
by Dizza_13 on Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 02:05:23 AM AEST
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great work. Much truth in this.

dizza

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