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Forever and Beyond
Contributed by
Stew
on
Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 07:26:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I saw this guy
Just walking on the street
I couldn't believe what happened
That both of our eyes could meet.
But both of us just kept walking
And didn't look back
I'm sorry that I didn't
Now my life is black.
I had no idea
That you were the one for me
I wish I would've known
I wish I could've seen.
For that night I had a dream
A dream I couldn't believe
You were there holding me
That was something I wanted to achieve.
But thankfully we met again
I didn't waste any time
I went right on over to you
And said a pretty rhyme...
"Of you I am very fond
And we will be together
Forever and beyond!"
Copyright ©
Stew
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2004-08-07 19:26:11]
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Re: Forever and Beyond
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by nickyboy on
Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 08:23:20 PM AEST
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I think that this is a good one. Gee it kinda makes me wish i was brave enough to go up to girls and tell them like that.
GOOD JOB. keep it up
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Re: Forever and Beyond
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by MomentInTime on
Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 10:58:04 PM AEST
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I just loooooooooooooove a happy ending!
'specially when it's written in rhyme.
Jordan :o) |
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Re: Forever and Beyond
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by inoc on
Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 11:17:43 PM AEST
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nice ending
I'm glad you both are happy
love reading your work |
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Re: Forever and Beyond
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by Lizard on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 01:29:16 PM AEST
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Hey Beanie, Lizard here
I really liked the poem. I hope that you continue writing.
well that's all for now!
Catch ya later my bestest best buddy pal friend
:) |
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Re: Forever and Beyond
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by emystar on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 03:46:41 AM AEST
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Beautifull write.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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