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Hello, I'm Still Here
Contributed by
Seikjo
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Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 03:53:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Hello, I'm here but not here, but still am.
I travel distant miles, with no one to stop me.
I fell down so far, it seemed like forever.
So much pain, I cant bear it.
I see people pass, but no one sees me.
Hello, I'm still here.
I'm no longer in pain, I cant feel it anymore.
Hello, I'm still here.
Please come save me.
I cant seem to belive, I'm still here.
I travelled distant miles.
Hello, I'm still here.
Please come save me.
Hello?
Hello?...
Copyright ©
Seikjo
... [
2004-08-07 15:53:18]
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Re: Hello, I'm Still Here
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by Katie2008 on
Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 03:56:54 PM AEST
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This poem is one that I can definitely relate to, therefore I like it a lot! I hate the feeling that you're living a non-exsistant life. Hope things get better for you and someone "finds" you. Good luck.
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Re: Hello, I'm Still Here
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by darkplaidbabe on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 08:30:47 PM AEST
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whoa, thats awesome! theres such a feeling of ...hopelessness. sadness, and entrapment. i can relate to this. IM me if you ever need to talk. great write!
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