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Night Time
Contributed by
Oriana
on
Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 03:10:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Sitting outside
On the cool, white concrete
in my backyard.
There is near silence,
for no cars pass by my street
at this time of night.
9:10 PM
The only sounds I hear are
the of pool pump's steady humming
and the cricket's soft music.
Glazing at the sky,
It looks like a dried red rose
against the white moon.
That hangs half full casting its light
onto the sleeping world below.
Contentedly, I listen to
The cool water lap
against the side of my pool.
Never changing in its rhythm.
Stars sprinkle the sky
making the night,
a precious gem
to keep in my memory
Forever.
Copyright ©
Oriana
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2004-08-07 15:10:47]
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Re: Night Time
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by Katie2008 on
Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 04:03:07 PM AEST
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I like this poem a lot. Sometimes the most beautiful things are also the most simple. I love the night. You used really good description.
Katie
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Re: Night Time
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 04:07:09 PM AEST
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Lovely imagery.... I love doing this also...
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