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Truthfully
Contributed by
DreamsOfDark
on
Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 02:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Even though it is not true
I know what I must do
Go around and tell a lie
I'm quite too shy
to be a spy
for when the world darkens
and the sun also dies
the stars will be mine
and no longer shall I live a lie
For the day and me
were not meant to be
early birds and midnights
are the lives I lead
I'm but a mortal
I've gone through a portal
so the day and me
were not meant to be
for if it was
its not because
the way I am is naught but me.
Copyright ©
DreamsOfDark
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2002-10-30 14:40:00]
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Re: Truthfully
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by OreO on
Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 02:56:45 PM AEST
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Beautifully written
Very heartfelt , alot of feeling
in this poem, Great write
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: Truthfully
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by horseluver on
Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 03:05:58 PM AEST
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| wow-your first attempt? This is really good-keep writing -you have talent-lotsa luck ~Jess |
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Re: Truthfully
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by viola on
Sunday, 17th November 2002 @ 03:12:22 PM AEST
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| the first of many thoughts to come...let them all in now, poetry gets into your bones. |
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