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Her Illusion
Contributed by
Bruce
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Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 09:31:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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August Seventh Two Thousand Four
it almost feels like, I have been here before
In one of my dreams, a few years back
I stopped in more than one, unfamiliar shack
I tried on lots of shoes , almost for one hour
The person helping me, got very sour
I couldn't make up my mind, whatever I was shown
Nothing seem right, like from the unknown
When I approached this store, in two thousand four
I knew I had been here, that was for sure
What to do next, should I go in again
will the same lady be there, and rememeber me when
When she had waited on me, or was it really a dream
and it would not matter, or would she just scream
Get out, get out, you are not welcome here
once was enough, so I ran out in fear
When did this happen, my mind is a blank
did I do something terrible, or is it a prank
Please someone help me, get over this joke
Like this never happened, and she never spoke
Copyright ©
Bruce
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2004-08-07 09:31:27]
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Re: Her Illusion
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by Oriana on
Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 01:13:36 PM AEST
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| I like it please write more like this when you get a chance. |
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Re: Her Illusion
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by Stew on
Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 03:45:26 PM AEST
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I really like this piece. sometimes this happens to me too. i hope you get to write some more.
love forever
stew |
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