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You dont know me

Contributed by corrupted_minds on Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 03:48:16 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide




You don’t know me, you don’t know who I am,
You wouldn’t understand you’re just like other men,
If only you knew how it feels to be me,
Than maybe little boy you might try to see,
I hurt from the present, I hurt from the past,
What ever love did was always last,

One man has had my love, his never let it go,
By saying you were a craze your saying I’m a ho,
And if it’s that is truth then why live life?
Your making me lure right to the knife,’
By saying these words you may feel free,
But did you ever think how they’d effect me?

Unsure of whether to call me friend, then do not,
Our friendship always was beginning to rot,
You can’t expect me to love you,
Unless I lie it would be true,
I don’t believe in love at first sight,
It’s made over time, not made over night,

You think you know pain, you’ve never died,
I’ve been to hell and back and still survived,
You think you know pain, try pick up a blade,
In the darkness it’s night, there is no shade,
I’ve bled for what life’s done to me,
You can’t judge only on what you see,

You think everything I do is just a show,
How ***** long did it take to know?
I’m a messed up freak, it’s nothing to bask,
So why do you think that I put on a mask,
I sometimes think I’d better off forlorn,
But someone like you would be happy I’m gone,

Illusions they fool, not a person or heart,
From beginning to end nowhere to start,
I’d never regret the blood that let run,
Or maybe you rather me use daddies old gun,
Words you’ve spoken brought me great sorrow,
Think hard now will you see me tomorrow?








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Re: You dont know me (User Rating: 1 )
by Dizza_13 on Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 03:59:24 AM AEST
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sad.....i'm always here 4 you if you need to talk loretta.

Dizza
xoxoxoxoxox


Re: You dont know me (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 04:15:21 AM AEST
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It's got quite a few speeling errors in it. it's a good poem, very sad though!
where you've put
"Illusions they fool, not a person or heart,
From beginning to end nowhere to start,
I’d never regret the blood that let run,
Or maybe you rather me use daddies old gun,
Words you’ve spoken brought me great sorrow,
Think hard now will you see me tomorrow?"
i think that was the best part of the poem.
it was ended very well indeed!
... but please don't end your life!


Re: You dont know me (User Rating: 1 )
by cj_ranson on Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 04:19:30 AM AEST
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mmm, i dont know what too say, just know were here for u always,

Cj
xoxoxox


Re: You dont know me (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 04:24:47 AM AEST
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So sad..pl. don't use any gun. venkat


Re: You dont know me (User Rating: 1 )
by badboyzlover on Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 04:53:21 PM AEST
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I love this poem very much it is very sad. And the pain you talked about many people have felt it. I hope all the people you love will always see you tomorrow. If you ever need to talk I'm here for you as of many others.


Re: You dont know me (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 09:50:17 PM AEST
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Sad. But still awesome poem.




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