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Life is Like A Long, Dark Corridor
Contributed by
Katie2008
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Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 02:00:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Life is like a long, dark corridor
Twisting and turning, what fun!
An adventure for the bravest of beings
Crawling and falling
Leaving others behind
Barricaded by problems
At first this was fun but now I can't find my way
I can't find my light
Copyright ©
Katie2008
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2004-08-07 02:00:16]
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Re: Life is Like A Long, Dark Corridor
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by Rylo on
Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 02:03:08 AM AEST
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| Another great write, good job, and keep them coming. |
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Re: Life is Like A Long, Dark Corridor
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by Seikjo on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 01:21:16 PM AEST
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| Now i will not say anything more about how discracefull and stupid your poetry is, even though you did to me. I understand that it is you just trying to express yourslef, and even though you are not blessed with the ways of words i will keep my mouth shut. and me being able to do this proves me to be the more mature one between us, casue i do not have to put down other's thought and emotions to make myself feel better. |
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Re: Life is Like A Long, Dark Corridor
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 06:45:16 PM AEST
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Oh this is really beautiful..I love the concept....
Now I have to read the other one..(Cemetery)
Jenni |
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