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Making Love
Contributed by
rylo
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Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 01:34:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Candles melting in the heat of the night,
And a romantic feeling, that has never felt so right.
Embraced together, and caressed by the moon,
Our love is as wonderful, as a flower in bloom.
Hearts pounding, and pulses racing,
This is a love, that my mind will be tracing.
In a pure moment of ecstasy,
And juices flowing like a stream.
I couldn’t ask for anything better,
Then a love between you and me.
Hand in hand, and legs intertwined,
Our bodies are covered in the finest of wines.
Lips to lips,
And hands upon hips.
We go with the motion, as our bodies dip.
I tell you the words you long to hear,
As I send sweet whispers in your ear.
Telling you, that I love you dear.
Copyright ©
rylo
... [
2004-08-07 01:34:16]
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Re: Making Love
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by venkat on
Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 02:09:34 AM AEST
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| Awww..ha,ha,ha..hot and sweet. venkat |
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Re: Making Love
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by Katie2008 on
Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 02:11:20 AM AEST
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Another beautiful poem, you have a way with words and you can rhyme wonderfully.
Katie |
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Re: Making Love
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by Oriana on
Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 03:35:44 PM AEST
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| Can't help it must laugh ....haahhaahahaha....ok I`m done. very well written and sweet |
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Re: Making Love
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by shelby on
Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 08:30:23 PM AEST
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ahhhhhhh very steamy even for this desert I live in excuse me while I get the fan ok now Ill be serious here Ron this is purely lovely!
Michelle |
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Re: Making Love
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by Vampirequeen on
Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 02:34:30 AM AEST
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wow so beautiful.
You are one talented poet.
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Re: Making Love
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 07:41:29 PM AEST
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| Sweet and Romantic...Racey too.. lol |
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