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To you

Contributed by freelancejoker on Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 12:53:12 AM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

Since the very beginning,
I somehow knew that you were the one.
Cannot explain the excitement I got,
Nor the butterflies in my gut,
But it is something,
That provided the link.
I didn't know what.
Funny,
Really.

As you approached me,
And said, "Hi, I'm Y"
I can feel my heart pounding,
And my lungs exploding.
This electrifying experience,
Left me in a deep trance,
What exactly is this I'm feeling?

You went on to intro yourself,
And I felt, what the hell!
Why can't I be myself?
I took a glance at your dimply face,
My heart raced.
I couldn't control the pace,
Or my awkward ways.
I was in a daze,
And at you, I could only gaze.

"Is there something?"
You broke the silence and my stare.
I shyly turned away,
No way could I dare,
To steal a second glare.

"Its nothing"
YOu probed and said "There must be something"
You gave me such a scare,
You seemed to know what I wanted to declare,
and what my heart yearned to bare.

What a great opportunity,
But I went gritt-witty!
A thousand words in my mouth,
But I didn't utter a sound.
Tongue tied,
Lips tight,
How I wished to hide,
In a hole so wide.

You smiled,
like you understood my thoughts.
That beautiful smile,
Made it all worthwhile.
I went out of sorts,
My body cramped in knots,
I was simply dazzled,
My heart was weathered.

"Are you ok?"
I heard you say "How's the day?"
"A beautiful sunny day!"
Words within words,
A profound approach.
You smirked,
Your shoulders you shirked.
"Ahh yes a beautiful day.."

Finally our eyes met,
On you I was set.
Oh cast me a fisherman's net,
For it's you I want to catch.

This is outta this earth,
Not felt so since my birth.
I knew I knew...
This must be love...

Copyright © freelancejoker ... [ 2004-08-07 00:53:12]
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Re: To you (User Rating: 1 )
by Katie2008 on Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 02:15:44 AM AEST
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I like this poem a lot! You really describe the feelings well....I'm sure very many people go through the same way. I'm sure whoever "Y" is would love this!
Katie

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