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The Funny Lookin Kid
Contributed by
Luka
on
Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 11:44:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
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he was the funny lookin kid
no one knew him by name
he was the funny lookin kid
noone let him in to play the game
he gets made fun of
everyone sits and stairs
because he is the only one who dosent comb his hair
hes the one whos always in a fight
hes the one who secretly crys at night
when hes home alone
he sits in his pairents room
starring at his dads gun
whishing there was soemthing he could have done
he packs the gun in his bag
brings it to school the next day
waiting to see what people will say
waiting for the first name to be called
waiting for the first funny looks he gets
he feels nothings left to lose
people run threw the doors and hall
others in the corened crawled in a ball
9 others across the room
9 shells on the floor
at first it was fun
now he sees what he has done
he turns the gun
10
he was the funny lookin kid
no one knew him by name
he was the funny lookin kid
noone let him in to play the game
he was the funny lookin
he was
Copyright ©
Luka
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2004-08-06 23:44:26]
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Re: The Funny Lookin Kid
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by Katie2008 on
Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 02:20:04 AM AEST
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This poem was very well written and I think it shows you're a very open minded person to write a poem like this. I also wrote a poem on this topic called "Through the Eyes of an Innocent Killer." However, I got some mean private messages saying that I was supporting violence within the schools. That certainly wasn't my intention and I know it's not yours. WONDERFUL write.
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Re: The Funny Lookin Kid
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by gery_giggles on
Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 08:29:46 PM AEST
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brings back old memories.great write though..shows the pain of the forgotten ones.
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Re: The Funny Lookin Kid
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by Hakiokusaken on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 11:03:45 PM AEST
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very nice, a Iike the way you touched on a touchy subject. good job.
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