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Cemetery Life
Contributed by
savedbydeath
on
Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 11:15:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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sitten on this old tomb stone
sitten here all alone
wanting to go home
no one ever in sight
i can always see the light
the light is so bright
living this cemetary life
going on five years
feels like knifes are in my back
i feel so cold,cuz
it's so cold,i was
untold,the meaning
of this life
it's pretty bad i cry
myself to sleep everynight
i want to say good-bye
i'm called uptight,it's
not fair,but i don't care
living this cemetary life
going on five years
feels like knifes are in my back
want to go out
rome all about
you're such a sell-out
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2004-08-06 23:15:41] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Cemetery Life
(User Rating: 1 ) by cheech on
Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 10:07:58 AM AEST (User
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i really like this poem,this is the second poem i've read about ur father,the first "hey dad"was simple and i understood all ur words,but this 1 i'm gonna need ur help,i don't understand sitten on this old tomb stone
sitten here all alone
wanting to go home,well actually if i understood that part i think i'd understand the rest,does ur father really make u sit on a tomb stone??
great write,full of emotions that over powered me,yes i cried,keep up the good work!
cheech
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