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Forgotten
Contributed by
Essentially9
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Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 10:51:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Forgotten
You're giving up
And turning away
Too frayed and fading
Losing everything
To your pain
Too frayed over time
Numb to you leaving my life
What could have been
Fading away since then
Into memories forgotten
Losing to the pain within
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2004-08-06 22:51:06]
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Re: Forgotten
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by Kie on
Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 11:33:09 PM AEST
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Heartwrenching.
This poem emits a very powerful expression.
Kie
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Re: Forgotten
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by morelikelyrics on
Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 11:51:41 PM AEST
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to-the-point-emotion
yes, indeed a powerful write... well-done |
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Re: Forgotten
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by waos on
Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 01:11:47 AM AEST
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| thats really good. sad and painful to me, cause i can relate to it too much. really good job writing it, i really liked it as i've liked others of yours. |
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Re: Forgotten
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by afterdark on
Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 03:25:26 PM AEST
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| This was very good..There is not a thing anyone can ever say of your work..Or let aone you..So many of those who post here are not worth a damn..Old people writing mindless good ole day poems and children posting cutter and school locker jammed poems..You my dear..Are the future of poetry |
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