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crucifixion
Contributed by
Blue
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Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 12:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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i will not fight you anymore
you've led me down your dirt road
here on your iron cross i lie
nails imbedded in my hands and feet
i'm sick of fighting
i shall lie here in agony amongst your sinners
and your liars
keep my eyes on the heavens
as you spit on my feet
you've taken what i own
you've taken away my soul
and i shall merely be here, crucified
until my soul is free
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2002-10-30 12:40:00]
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Re: crucifixion
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by lil_angel on
Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 12:52:18 PM AEST
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| wow a great write! |
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Re: crucifixion
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by stephy on
Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 01:48:06 PM AEST
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| very nice... it's sad and makes me feel your pain. very well written. |
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Re: crucifixion
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by horseluver on
Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 03:16:39 PM AEST
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| this is great in a sad and morbid sort of way-but I like that it really creates a strong mood when reading it-which I think is important in poetry-well done~Jess |
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Re: crucifixion
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by OreO on
Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 04:09:38 PM AEST
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This is so sad
Beautiful write though
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: crucifixion
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by Delusions_of_Grandeur on
Thursday, 31st October 2002 @ 01:07:45 AM AEST
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| amazingly powerful write! i felt it through me with the very powerful imagery you used! great job, keep it up! |
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Re: crucifixion
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by rockshv on
Thursday, 31st October 2002 @ 11:59:00 AM AEST
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wow this is a nice great piece of work!
;O) |
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