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every night i fight with the mirror

Contributed by buccaneer on Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 10:27:59 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

every night i fight a war with the mirror
if knowing me is an experience,then being me should be destiny.
dreams they say comes true or at least
but a dream about me,by me,for me is a bit hard to explain
who i am is what i see but what i see is hard to explain
my pain,my love,my joy,my happiness is all there is to be me
but my pain blurs my forsight,my love creates dullness,my happiness is real in empteness.
my joy is faith in God but my faith is weak as my love is blur
what more do i see in me to be me
if every night i fight a war with the mirror to be me

all i wanted to achieve in life is greatness
but temptation makes it look blured
i walk but the world runs
i run but the world relaxes
i relax and the world questions me
who am i? is an understatement
what i am is unexplanable
it is me in the mirror but i don't see me.
many fight to find peace some fight to find wealth or something else
i fight a war with the mirror still i am me,myself and i.

every day my occupation means pain and vexation.
every night my heart does not lie down in peace but to the vanity of me not being me.
i struggle to find the purpose of living
i try to answer the three questions which seems to be fundermental
the problem of eternity,human personality and of evil.
i have failed to solve none of them all
and still my fear is in me and my fear is me
what more can be dangerous than not knowing who you are or what
but still am trying to save me from me
fighting with the mirror where me is definately not me but me.

Copyright © buccaneer ... [ 2004-08-06 22:27:59]
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Re: every night i fight with the mirror (User Rating: 1 )
by CrimsonTears on Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 07:07:10 PM AEST
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i feel the same way....you should read my poem its called The girl in the mirror...its kinda liek this....great write

Lots of Love
CrimsonTears

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