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Out of Control
Contributed by
Essentially9
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Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 10:07:03 PM in AEST
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Out of Control
You unleashed
The force within me
This road you have paved
With good intentions
Is leading you astray
Hell you must pay
For what you did to me
You'll be another memory
As I obliterate you away
With deception and lies
You've sealed your fate
The fault's no longer mine
What you did create
Is the end of your lives
One fire at a time
The fire I control
Your lives I hold
The destruction unfolds
Due to my eyes, so cold
To even the score
The fire within me burns
For more
It's out of control
As you take the one I love
Till I even the score
Your lives are mine to hold
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2004-08-06 22:07:03]
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Re: Out of Control
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by deathdrop on
Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 03:24:12 PM AEST
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well i've never heard of 'Fire Starter' or 'Steven King' but i found your poem excellent!
you've done a really good job here.
it's nice work.
=) from deathdrop.
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Re: Out of Control
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by afterdark on
Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 09:20:35 PM AEST
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good write..i love the book..but how did this person not know who Stephan King is?? odd
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