|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Lifeline
Contributed by
acidicblasphemy
on
Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 06:11:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
|
It holds up your life
every second that you live.
No reason to be underlined,
you don’t need that extra lift.
Taking it away
is a very simple task;
removing the line
that held up your past.
Just think of those memories,
all of them bad.
Nobody will miss you,
They won’t even be sad.
Slicing your wrists,
Now your problems have cleared.
For finally your lifeline
has disappeared.
Copyright ©
acidicblasphemy
... [
2004-08-06 18:11:00]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Lifeline
(User Rating: 1 )
by Alina on
Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 07:37:47 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Your poem flows very freely!! But, I have delt with depression and have had numerous attempts at suicide, and have almost completely succeeded. You will find something someday that will make this life of yours more beautiful and will make you want to live. You're searching in the wrong places. Let love find you, sooner or later it will.Keep trying and hang in there. You can always send a message to me if you need to talk, or you can pray......
Always, Alina |
|
|
Re: Lifeline
(User Rating: 1 )
by grip-wth-broken-fingers on
Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 12:59:22 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| nice write and it is easier to hurt yourself that talk or deal with it i know i still find it reAl hard thank you for this write xgripx |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
