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Cheers
Contributed by
KiLin
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Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 04:19:39 PM in AEST
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Its Friday night, Its time to laugh,
Its time to drink, and have a blast.
Come one Come all, lets slam a few,
this ones on me for all of you.
Well sing, Well dance, Well have a ball,
Well laugh at jokes until we fall.
No one cares, No one offends.
and when were here, we all are friends.
So its you and me, shot for shot.
You think youll win? you think alot!
So throw your worries, throw your cares,
and dont feel bad when people stare.
Copyright ©
KiLin
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2004-08-06 16:19:39]
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Re: Cheers
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 09:49:16 PM AEST
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WELCOME TO YPDC kILI.......Welcome aboard.......you with no butt! teehee.
Loved your poem.....so carefree and fun!!!
I also like your style.....throw your cares, and feel bad when people stare.......You've learned at a young age.......not to be influenced by what others think.......that keeps you free.
Enjoyed this tremendously......
Keep writing, I'll be here to comment!!!
Lovingcritters,
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Re: Cheers
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by all4jesus_teen on
Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 05:56:22 AM AEST
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| Cool poem. Light hearted and fun:) |
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