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Emotional Abuse.
Contributed by
deathdrop
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Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 01:55:40 PM in AEST
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The look in your eyes says enough,
But still you begin, open your gob!
And what you release,
Is the same old thing.
Same old words,
Same old speach.
You think you understand.
All parts of me!
But I don't need your hand!
DON'T EVEN TOUCH ME!
Oh yeah, that's right,
Sit down and cry.
Because I went on a roof,
Wanting to die!
Sit down and cry,
Act the age of 3.
Whisper your silent tears,
Only to me!
Stand hugging me,
Holding me close!
Then get all offended,
When I smack,
And shout "NO!"
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deathdrop
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2004-08-06 13:55:40]
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Re: Emotional Abuse.
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by pixie on
Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 02:03:52 PM AEST
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i dont mean to sound harsh, but can you stop fpor one moment and think of how your mum feels?? her daughter which I am sure she loves felt so depressed she went up to a roof and threatened to throw herself off, I have too put my mum and dad through lots of unecessary pain and hurt , I truly regret it, Deathdrop your mum is probably scared to death (no pun intended) she will be a bag of nerves inside., sick with worry......I really hope that you can find some inner peace hunni...
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: Emotional Abuse.
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by Alina on
Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 03:31:48 PM AEST
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This is to the above comment posted by Pixie ( no offense ). Personally, you can't say what her mom feels or may think of her daughter. You may think that " Deathdrop"s mom is just like any others but you can never judge when you don't know the whole story. Maybe you are right, and maybe you are wrong, but things only get worse before they get better. To: Deathdrop, i hope your feelings get better and you and your mom will learn how to work through your problems. I've had many problems with my parents, but I finally learned how to love and talk to them the hard way. It's only a matter of time. Keep Ya Head Up.
Alina |
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Re: Emotional Abuse.
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 04:10:50 PM AEST
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| must emotion shown. people try to help and they dont know how. i guess the fact that sometimes people even try to make the effort means something. great write. |
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Re: Emotional Abuse.
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 06:32:13 PM AEST
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Alina, I don't think your comment to Pixie was necessary at all. You were very rude. At least she cares enough to try to offer a suggestion, right or wrong. It is not your place to judge her either. Rosie, I hope you can come to some place of peace with all of this before it destroys both of you.
Rita |
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Re: Emotional Abuse.
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by cheech on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 06:41:57 PM AEST
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great write,i feel some relations between us,there is help out there,for u and ur mom,keep up the great work
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Re: Emotional Abuse.
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by Broken_Skin on
Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 06:26:25 AM AEST
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As much as i love Pixie lol, I agree with Alina.
We just dont know how her mother treats her,
and feels towards her, so non of us are in any
possition to push our presumptions of how
any one feels upon her. |
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