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The Valley
Contributed by
goya
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Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 11:34:46 AM in AEST
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The Valley
He caught the scent of dreadful fear,
Held out his hands, I shed a tear.
His laughter sounds extremely clear,
As he notices my despair.
He's my prince upon the throne,
His lips are cold, his hands are stone.
Blood rushes in a lifeless poem,
There's nothing but the flesh and bone.
I wanna touch him really bad,
Take the Sorrow, take the Black.
I hear his plead and move away,
Please, don't let me die today.
Reality fades as he strokes my hair,
He tells me I'm dying but I don't care.
He looks down at me and I could swear,
I've never seen a person so fair.
I close my eyes and take the last breath,
As I linger here in The Valley of Death.
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2004-08-06 11:34:46]
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Re: The Valley
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by all4jesus_teen on
Saturday, 18th September 2004 @ 07:24:14 PM AEST
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| WOW! Excellent work!:) |
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Re: The Valley
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 12:41:36 PM AEST
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| descriptive, sad...well written! |
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Re: The Valley
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by buchi on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 04:14:30 PM AEST
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| This piece is chiefly remarkable for the force, metrical and moral,....well done ...loved it |
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