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Do you remember?
Contributed by
acidicblasphemy
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Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 11:03:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Do you remember that girl
with wavy brown hair,
who you'd laugh at and mock,
but she would just stand there?
Do you remember that girl
you poked at and hit?
She did nothing to you,
yet you treated her like ***.
Do you remeber that girl
who just didn't care?
She'd only wear black,
and never worried about her hair.
Do you remember that girl?
Well she's gone now.
She took her own life,
her scream wasn't loud.
You took it away from her
little by little.
She'd sew it back together,
but the pieces stayed brittle.
Her life cut short
by her fathers gun.
She pulled the trigger,
and let her soul run.
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Re: Do you remember?
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by diamond_tears on
Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 11:48:14 AM AEST
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| very matter of fact i liked it take care. msg me if u need xx |
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Re: Do you remember?
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by Nazmythian on
Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 06:44:22 PM AEST
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my favorite line ... "and let her soul run". I have had friends that I will think about that way now. Their souls running free ...
Very nice. Thank you.
Naz ~ |
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Re: Do you remember?
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by amber1988 on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 08:37:53 AM AEST
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| very nice. it's amazing what people can push others to do. it's a great write. |
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