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Lucy
Contributed by
KiLin
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Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 10:55:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Lucy, Lucy, Satens daughter
come and see the lambs to slaughter
come at night and dont be seen
the sheperds eye is sharp and keen
Lucy, Lucy, filled with sorrow
goodnight for now, until tomorrow
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Re: Lucy
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by Oriana on
Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 12:54:46 PM AEST
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*looks wide eyed* That's slightly strange almost reminds me of Freddy's theme song off Nightmare are Elm street *cringe* anyway,
It's super. Please do write one like that. *starting humming 1-2 Freddy's coming for you.* Urgh....now it's in my head... thanks...lol
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Re: Lucy
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 09:55:15 PM AEST
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Spooky, Spooky, Spooky, but well written indeed. Few words, but powerful, I don't care for Dark poetry, but this one is allowed.
Good write......do it again,
And thank you for your nice comment on my poems too!
Poetic hugs
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Re: Lucy
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 10:52:27 PM AEST
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| great talent. |
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