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paralyzed, i can no longer feel
Contributed by
corrupted_minds
on
Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 10:04:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Paralyzed, I can no longer feel,
Just like I can no longer heal,
Torment is all I know is real,
And now my skins begun to peal,
Love and hate both hurt the same,
And in the end what do we gain?
This restless heart you will not tame,
Even in the sunlight the clouds will rain,
Moonlight reaches both my eyes,
Both weary from my lonely cries,
It’s like when only someone tries,
Then another innocent person dies,
So let me go I need to run,
This life I’ve had was less than fun,
I need to go, it must be done,
Then over life I’ve finally won,
Burning wax will scar my arm,
Don’t worry I meant to cause me harm,
If there’s blood don’t be alarm,
I’m still in flesh so still stay calm,
In my bed my wrists will bleed,
Then I have everything in life I need,
With each drop will exit creed,
And when I’m empty I’m finally freed,
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Re: paralyzed, i can no longer feel
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by Nazmythian on
Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 10:15:40 AM AEST
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| Just a little minor polish and it would be perfect. An excellent quick write. |
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Re: paralyzed, i can no longer feel
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by lovespoetic0518 on
Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 10:16:59 AM AEST
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A very good write, A very sad thought. I hope that you can try to get over whatever has depressed you enough to write this poem. Take care
Kimberly :) |
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Re: paralyzed, i can no longer feel
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by Dizza_13 on
Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 10:02:08 PM AEST
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Great write. Real raw emotion. Im always here if you need to talk.
Dizza
xoxoxoxoxox |
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Re: paralyzed, i can no longer feel
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by Hakiokusaken on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 09:16:50 PM AEST
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I just read this now and had to comment. really good job.
Hakiokusaken |
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