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She's A Gold Mine In Your Heart
Contributed by
inoc
on
Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 06:44:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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There was a special friend
I had and state
-it's true
we shared a lot of secret thoughts
and feelings
-black to blue
the days were full of pleasure
feeling happy and alive
I just wish I was still happy deep inside
the dark day had come
and made my life so vain
a misunderstanding made my life
full of pain
I have my family
I wouldn't be without them that's for sure
but to have a true friend
to rely on
- that's the core
so if you have a loving friend
I really do advise
Hold on to your friendship
and please
-realise
Honestly look inside yourself
she's a goldmine in your heart
look after her
she's an asset
never let your friend ever
-depart
Copyright ©
inoc
... [
2004-08-06 06:44:05]
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Re: She's A Gold Mine In Your Heart
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by WinterFawn on
Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 07:09:56 AM AEST
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Beautiful rhyme...I love the message in this verse. You are truly blessed to have a wonderful friend to depend on. Great write.
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Re: She's A Gold Mine In Your Heart
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by Tanmaya on
Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 07:37:26 AM AEST
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Nice write.
I liked the line-
'she's a goldmine in your heart'
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